Comments for Neabsco Technology http://itrtneabsco.edublogs.org Third Grade Blog Thu, 28 Aug 2008 05:12:46 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 Comment on Stories by mariya http://itrtneabsco.edublogs.org/writing/#comment-174 mariya Tue, 13 May 2008 16:58:38 +0000 http://itrtneabsco.edublogs.org/writing/#comment-174 Mr.harriesburdick by mariya Two weeks passed and it habend agaion and there was a five pound person Under his rug and he picked up the chare and it keep Cralling under the rug and as the days pasted the monster keep Comeing bake and each day went by the man keep beating the five Pound monster under the rug and never stop comeing Back one day the man herd a big bang bang bang bang and there it was he saw it agion for the mans hole life and wone day he asked for help And nowone herd him scream Ahhhhhhhhh and the next day he was not heard from agiaon and the monster keep comeing bake and never stoped and it happened a gene and a gene the next day the monster desckuverd the man was goneand he never came back and his mom was so so so heart broken and she was sowe said she could not sleep and his dad was sowe said he could not sleep And there was a big boom and as the failmly got clouse the boom got bigger and bigger. the end. Mr.harriesburdick by mariya
Two weeks passed and it habend agaion and there was a five pound person
Under his rug and he picked up the chare and it keep
Cralling under the rug and as the days pasted the monster keep
Comeing bake and each day went by the man keep beating the five
Pound monster under the rug and never stop comeing
Back one day the man herd a big bang bang bang bang and there it was he saw it agion for the mans hole life and wone day he asked for help
And nowone herd him scream Ahhhhhhhhh and the next day he was not heard from agiaon and the monster keep comeing bake and never stoped and it happened a gene and a gene the next day the monster desckuverd the man was goneand he never came back and his mom was so so so heart broken and she was sowe said she could not sleep and his dad was sowe said he could not sleep And there was a big boom and as the failmly got clouse the boom got bigger and bigger. the end.

]]> Comment on Stories by Handhy http://itrtneabsco.edublogs.org/writing/#comment-173 Handhy Tue, 13 May 2008 16:55:13 +0000 http://itrtneabsco.edublogs.org/writing/#comment-173 Under the rug; Handhy Harris Burdick Two weeks passed and it happened again A man got a chair and hit the floor.As the man hit the floor and then it was a boy.And the litgh want off.And the books fill down. And the men glass file down.And the men chair fill down. And the men splip on the rug.And the men panst fill down.And the tabl fill down on the men feet. And the men fill down steer.And the men went to the street. Under the rug;
Handhy

Harris Burdick

Two weeks passed and it happened again A man got a chair and hit the floor.As the man hit the floor and then it was a boy.And the litgh want off.And the books fill down.
And the men glass file down.And the men chair fill down. And the men splip
on the rug.And the men panst fill down.And the tabl fill down on the men feet.
And the men fill down steer.And the men went to the street.

]]> Comment on Stories by ropee http://itrtneabsco.edublogs.org/writing/#comment-172 ropee Tue, 13 May 2008 16:54:21 +0000 http://itrtneabsco.edublogs.org/writing/#comment-172 Mr.lindens library by ropee A girl went to a library down her street.the man told her to leave but she went in. She saw a book called the book.she buyed it .Mr.lindens told her not to read it .she thought he wanted to scare her.she took the book home and she never wanted to return it.that same night after,dinner she went to her room and started to read it.the title page said READ IF YOU DARE .she was laughingwhen she read she got tired and went to sleep.something poped out. The girl didn’t listen and she was about to die.HE HAD WARNED HER ABOUT THE BOOK NOW ITS TO LATE.in the morning she was wrapped up in leaves and thornes. nowone was home.she thought will she get out or not? Her parents were in vacation and will be home in three monthes. she was stuck home a alone and in thornes. she had a babysitter but she comes late at night and she couldnt get the phone.she thought it was really scary so she tried to know how this happened.the book floated to her she was thinking why is a book floating.then the book went inside her thornes and the book opened and she started to read it.it said that you will get stuck in thornes and the way to get out is to say this I Will NEVER READ ThIS BOOK EVER AGAIN.so then the thones opened and she went right to the fireplace and burnt it and she could never read it again.she never told anyone this story she only kept it in her mind.and that was the end of the book.mr.lindens closed that library up next.the girl was so happy.the book was burnt and is never comeing back. Mr.lindens library by ropee
A girl went to a library down her street.the man told her to leave but she went in.
She saw a book called the book.she buyed it .Mr.lindens told her not to read it .she thought he wanted to scare her.she took the book home and she never wanted to return it.that same night after,dinner she went to her room and started to read it.the title page said READ IF YOU DARE .she was laughingwhen she read she got tired and went to sleep.something poped out. The girl didn’t listen and she was about to die.HE HAD WARNED HER ABOUT THE BOOK NOW ITS TO LATE.in the morning she was
wrapped up in leaves and thornes. nowone was home.she thought will she get out or not?
Her parents were in vacation and will be home in three monthes. she was stuck home a
alone and in thornes. she had a babysitter but she comes late at night and she couldnt get the phone.she thought it was really scary so she tried to know how this happened.the book floated to her she was thinking why is a book floating.then the book went inside her thornes and the book opened and she started to read it.it said that you will get stuck in thornes and the way to get out is to say this I Will NEVER READ ThIS BOOK EVER AGAIN.so then the thones opened and she went right to the fireplace and burnt it and she could never read it again.she never told anyone this story she only kept it in her mind.and that was the end of the book.mr.lindens closed that library up next.the girl was so happy.the book was burnt and is never comeing back.

]]> Comment on Stories by tatyana http://itrtneabsco.edublogs.org/writing/#comment-170 tatyana Tue, 13 May 2008 16:53:34 +0000 http://itrtneabsco.edublogs.org/writing/#comment-170 under the rug. by tatyana Two weeks passed and a cat was under the rug .The man kept the cat as a pet and never gave it to noboby because he liked it . One day the cat ran away .The man was wrried about the cat.then a dog saw the cat .the dog stared to chase the cat .the cat got saved by the man and they went home.the end. under the rug.
by tatyana
Two weeks passed and a cat was under the rug .The man kept the cat as a pet and never gave it to noboby because he liked it . One day the cat ran away .The man was wrried about the cat.then a dog saw the cat .the dog stared to chase the cat .the cat got saved by the man and they went home.the end.

]]> Comment on Stories by KENYATTA http://itrtneabsco.edublogs.org/writing/#comment-169 KENYATTA Tue, 13 May 2008 16:51:50 +0000 http://itrtneabsco.edublogs.org/writing/#comment-169 ARCHIE SMITH BOY WONDER BY KENYATTA A tiny voice asked is he the one? Archie Smith wock up hi I am Jack Sparow and welcome to the black pearl . I am Archie can Istear the bout yes . Boom! Oh no. What is rong Jack . Its Barbosa the badis pirite ever . Archie you can save us just beleve . I belev Archei blows the canen and blowsup Barbosas ship Archei saves the day ! ARCHIE SMITH BOY WONDER
BY KENYATTA

A tiny voice asked is he the one? Archie Smith wock up hi I am Jack Sparow and
welcome to the black pearl . I am Archie can Istear the bout yes . Boom! Oh no.
What is rong Jack . Its Barbosa the badis pirite ever . Archie you can save us just
beleve . I belev Archei blows the canen and blowsup Barbosas ship Archei saves
the day !

]]> Comment on Stories by ronald http://itrtneabsco.edublogs.org/writing/#comment-168 ronald Tue, 13 May 2008 16:50:33 +0000 http://itrtneabsco.edublogs.org/writing/#comment-168 Under the rug By Ronald One night a old man was sleeping in his humble then suddenly he heard a noise downstairs so he went downstairs for a look. Two minutes later he saw some thing crawling under his rug he picked up a wooden chair then he herd more noise that sounded like growling then he got a little scared . Then he went up stairs for a metal chair. When he grabbed the metal chair he was shivering when he was coming down the stairs the thing under his rug sounded more mad and angry the thing under his rug looked really big and scary then he let his chair go directly at the thing it passed right throw the thing it seemed like the thing was a ghost tow weeks passed and it happened again. Under the rug
By Ronald

One night a old man was sleeping in his humble then suddenly he heard a noise downstairs so he went downstairs for a look. Two minutes later he saw some thing crawling under his rug he picked up a wooden chair then he herd more noise that sounded like growling then he got a little scared . Then he went up stairs for a metal chair. When he grabbed the metal chair he was shivering when he was coming down the stairs the thing under his rug sounded more mad and angry the thing under his rug looked really big and scary then he let his chair go directly at the thing it passed right throw the thing it seemed like the thing was a ghost tow weeks passed and it happened again.

]]> Comment on Stories by Narmeen http://itrtneabsco.edublogs.org/writing/#comment-167 Narmeen Tue, 13 May 2008 16:48:02 +0000 http://itrtneabsco.edublogs.org/writing/#comment-167 Mr.Lindens Library Narmeen A Porson gave a Mary a book. The gril read the book. Then the gril fell a sleep. Then the book grew grass. When Mary woke up she saw The book grew grass. She had to close the book when she Whent to bed.That is how the book grew garss. The book kept growing grass. The prson tried to wared Mary about the Book. So Mary closed the book. The book kept growing grass. Mary try to close the book. But the grass was growing. When Mary real lueis the book was growing grass. So when Mary closed the book. The book stop growing grass but The grass was there not gone. So Mary try to find the prson Who gave her the book. Mary told her granddad about The book so they went to Mary`s room. But the grass was gone! Siad Mary she told her grandpa she was so scard. She was so happy. The grass was gone. She told grandpa She loved him.She Said Thank You Grandpa. She Siad. Then Mary said I am so glad that is over. Her gandpa said if someone warned you Close the book. Then thing go BAD. THE END Mr.Lindens Library
Narmeen

A Porson gave a Mary a book.
The gril read the book.
Then the gril fell a sleep.
Then the book grew grass.

When Mary
woke up she saw
The book grew grass.
She had to close the book when she
Whent to bed.That is how the book grew garss.

The book kept growing grass.

The prson tried to wared Mary about the
Book.

So Mary closed the book.

The book kept growing grass.

Mary try to close the book.
But the grass was growing. When Mary real lueis the book was growing
grass.
So when Mary closed the book.
The book stop growing grass but
The grass was there not gone.
So Mary try to find the prson
Who gave her the book.
Mary told her granddad about
The book so they went to
Mary`s room. But the grass was gone!
Siad Mary she told her grandpa she
was so scard. She was so happy.
The grass was gone. She told grandpa
She loved him.She Said Thank You Grandpa.
She Siad. Then Mary said I am so glad that is over.
Her gandpa said if someone warned you
Close the book. Then thing go BAD.

THE END

]]> Comment on Stories by Ta'Janee http://itrtneabsco.edublogs.org/writing/#comment-166 Ta'Janee Tue, 13 May 2008 16:44:52 +0000 http://itrtneabsco.edublogs.org/writing/#comment-166 Mrs.Lindens Libarian By:Ta’Janee There was a girl named Angel Gonza Farnersatased .Her Father Andrew Gona Perastato Told her not to read his diary, but she opened it. Angel got very sick. She was in the Hospital for a week. When she got out she read the diary again. Nothing happened to her, but she had a ear infection. He had warned her about the book ,but it was to late. Angela was died. The spirit was to strong. He tried to save her but it did not work. Angel got up she was blind and death. Helen Keller said”I will help you an will teach you braile . Angel was not blind or death She had 2 baby’s named Angela Raven Keller and Phaness Angel Keller .She was a princsess that lived in a castle. Her husband Charals Calvin Johnson loved to be rich.Angel was a person when everyone talked about her. They all lived happly ever after. THE END Mrs.Lindens Libarian
By:Ta’Janee

There was a girl named Angel Gonza Farnersatased .Her Father Andrew Gona Perastato Told her not to read his diary, but she opened it. Angel got very sick. She was in the Hospital for a week. When she got out she read the diary again. Nothing happened to her, but she had a ear infection. He had warned her about the book ,but it was to late. Angela was died. The spirit was to strong. He tried to save her but it did not work. Angel got up she was blind and death. Helen Keller said”I will help you an will teach you braile .

Angel was not blind or death She had 2 baby’s named Angela Raven Keller and Phaness Angel Keller .She was a princsess that lived in a castle. Her husband Charals Calvin Johnson loved to be rich.Angel was a person when everyone talked about her. They all lived happly ever after.

THE END

]]> Comment on Stories by MOIFA http://itrtneabsco.edublogs.org/writing/#comment-165 MOIFA Tue, 13 May 2008 16:43:03 +0000 http://itrtneabsco.edublogs.org/writing/#comment-165 ARCHIE SMITH, BOY WODER By monifa ONE NIGHT A LITTLE BOY WAS SLEEPING IN HIS BED.HE WOKE UP BECAUSE HE HAD A BAD DRAEM. HE WALKED OUT SIDE IN THE DARK RAINY AND WINDY NIGHT. HE FELL OVER A ROCK WHEN WALKING BACK TO HIS HOUSE .THEN HE HEARD ATINY VOICE ASKED ,IS HE THE ONE? HE TOLD HIS SELF WHAT IS THAT SMALL TINY VOICE . HE WONDERED WHO THAT WAS AND HE COULD FIGURE IT OUT. THE NEXT NIGHT HE WAS VERY SCARED THAT THE LITTLE VOICE SAID THAT IM GOING TO GET YOU! THE NEXT DAY HE TOLD HIS MOM AND DAD. THE BOY LIVED HAPPILY AND NOT SAD . The end ARCHIE SMITH, BOY WODER
By monifa

ONE NIGHT A LITTLE BOY WAS SLEEPING IN HIS BED.HE WOKE UP BECAUSE HE HAD A BAD DRAEM. HE WALKED OUT SIDE IN THE DARK RAINY AND WINDY NIGHT. HE FELL OVER A ROCK WHEN WALKING BACK TO HIS HOUSE .THEN HE HEARD ATINY VOICE ASKED ,IS HE THE ONE? HE TOLD HIS SELF WHAT IS THAT SMALL TINY VOICE . HE WONDERED WHO THAT WAS AND HE COULD FIGURE IT OUT. THE NEXT NIGHT HE WAS VERY SCARED THAT THE LITTLE VOICE SAID THAT IM GOING TO GET YOU! THE NEXT DAY HE TOLD HIS MOM AND DAD. THE BOY LIVED HAPPILY AND NOT SAD
.

The end

]]> Comment on Stories by haja http://itrtneabsco.edublogs.org/writing/#comment-164 haja Tue, 13 May 2008 16:39:09 +0000 http://itrtneabsco.edublogs.org/writing/#comment-164 Mr.Lindens’s library By Haja Mr.Linden had told Kelly about the book and he had warned her about the book, but it was too late. After she looked in the book she was should have been in trouble but She kept it away from telling him about her looking in the book. But her dad didn’t find out so she was lucky. The next day her dad had found out because the page he had put it on was changed. Plus she was the only one in the house who was desperate about looking in the book. After her getting in trouble, she was grounded for a week. After her punishment was over, her dad had told her specifically not to go in the book but she did. After her punishment, her dad told her that she had to go return the book because it was A library book. So she had to walk three miles to get to the library and three miles back to get home. When she got home her dad said that if she had done it again she will be in much much more trouble. when her dad told her that, she never looked in the book again. Mr.Lindens’s library
By Haja

Mr.Linden had told Kelly about the book and he had warned her about the book, but it was too late. After she looked in the book she was should have been in trouble but
She kept it away from telling him about her looking in the book. But her dad didn’t
find out so she was lucky. The next day her dad had found out because the page he had put it on was changed. Plus she was the only one in the house who was desperate about looking in the book. After her getting in trouble, she was grounded for a week. After her
punishment was over, her dad had told her specifically not to go in the book but she did.
After her punishment, her dad told her that she had to go return the book because it was
A library book. So she had to walk three miles to get to the library and three miles back to get home. When she got home her dad said that if she had done it again she will be in much much more trouble. when her dad told her that, she never looked in the book again.

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